I don't usually put comments on my work, but this poem makes
some people irate. "Calling Out God" came off the top of my
head in about ten minutes. It's not eloquent and not meant to
be. I like the pulpiteers line because I'm weary of any preacher who
lives the high life on poor widow's pennies...aka Leroy Jenkins,
Oral Roberts, Jimmy Swagart, Jim Baker, and onward. I don't believe
all Christians are like described here. Many including most of my family are the salt of the earth. If we're actually created
in his image, God would want us to believe and question, not
acquiesce to the bloodsuckers in
charge who want us to blindly follow. The hit against "the followers" is just
expressing the frustration of watching the moral majority type
Christian get involved in politics following like sheep without
actually weighing the consequences. Cheney and Rove had the mindset
and could have been Himmler and Goerbels, but it wouldn't have
mattered since they were in the "god-fearing" party. Politically, I
don't know that either party actually represents the average
American citizen. I have no qualms with Christianity, the poem's
just something that came out of the frustration of wondering why so
much suffering now and displaying a Christian with enough courage to
ask why. I believe the real Jesus would have appreciated it.
Link to a discussion Calling Out God on Fine Art America
My response to being called a blasphemer:
"All great truths begin as blasphemies” –
George Bernard Shaw
No, I don't really consider it blasphemy...that word's been used
against an awful lot of free thinkers including Martin Luther,
Galileo, and many others. The Pharisees considered Jesus teachings
as blasphemy at the time.
I think the poem just represents honest, open defiance of the
cop-out of modern religion's propensity to try to avoid current
problems by hoping for destruction as a savior instead of
rolling up their sleeves and making "this" world a better place.
Matthew 4:7
Jesus answered him, "It is also written: `Do not put the Lord your
God to the test.'"
Addendum - This is
the honest to goodness truth. After I wrote this poem, a lot of
bad things started happening: My marriage that was already on the
rocks sank to even a lower level of which details I won't get into.
My wife was stricken with pneumonia. I was hospitalized for
the first time in my adult life with an abdominal aliment still
unidentified. My basement flooded twice. And the final
straw was when my oldest biological child was in a automobile accident
in which she was swept up in a flash flood. She was fortunate
enough to grab hold of a tree a few hundred yards downstream and
hold on for an hour until help arrive. Unfortunately, it
claimed the life of one of her best friends. That evening, I
sat down and wrote God's reply. I doubt I'll ever buy into a
particular
religion, but I do believe there's a force out there they try to
define as God. I believe there is an afterlife we can't really
begin to fathom and that what you do in this life matters in some
way. I also think I will re-exam the intentions of my writing
and the karma my life generates.
Link to a discussion Calling Out God
addendum on Fine Art America
Side Note: There are three different random poems
when you hit the "Calling Out God" link. The poem actually
ends three different ways; "work for me", "share for me", and "love
for me". If you hit the back button on your browser, you can
eventually see all three versions.
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